I love all of your references! But the only thing I can see that's a bit off is the color of his markings - they're a bright blue, like in that screen you uploaded in the earlier comments. Unless your modeler just lightened them to near-white in the picture. 8|a
It's funny you should mention that, others have said it before. I think there's a glitch or something. Whenever I search for him online [wiki], I get Pallin with white markings (also, whenever I go to his office in ME1, his markings are white).
I can only assume that this is either a texture glitch or something to do with regions.
I can do a blue-markings version, too, if you wish .
Hmmm, that's definitely interesting! Every time I go see him they're the light blue, and I think everyone that I know around here has had his markings be blue. Come on Bioware, let's get some consistency here! If it's not too much trouble, a light blue version would be awesome if it's not too much trouble - I kind of adore Pallin, even though he's got such a small part in the games.